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Monday, June 28, 2010

.:Zuko:. Just So You Know .:Lemon:.

Name Of Character: Zuko
Name Of Your Character: Cityana
Personality: feisty, hot headed, strong, confiedent, slight bitchy, can laugh easy,
Sex: female
Looks: layered black hair with golden brown streaks
Crush: Zuko
Friends: Aang, Sokka, Suki (Katara and I fight a lot)
Likes: dirty dancing, fire, late nights, moon, ocean, flying, music, Zuko
Dislikes: Katara, Zhao, Azula, being bossed around, Mai
Favorite Thing In Life: dancing in the pale moonlight(hiphop dancing)
Other: can I be a new breed of bending star bending
Lemon: yes
Picture: yes
Song Interpertation: Zuko can't love me cause of Mai
Just so you know by Jesse McCartney

~Story Starts~

It was another one of those days, I felt it. It was going to be a long day. I travel with the avatar. I am a star bender. I can bend stars and shoot power stars instead of water, air, earth or fire. Fire, it reminds me of Zuko, he use to travel with us. He wanted to return to his nation and restore his honor, that day he tried to capture Aang. We had chased him away. That day broke my heart. I was in love with him ever since we met in the North Pole. We are now in the earth kingdom. I am always up before everyone else. I rarly sleep. I have not been able to. I heard someone awake.

“Good morning” I mumbled.

“Morning Cityana!” It was Toph, she is so cheerful.

“Morning” I heard Sokka mumble. I looked at him and there was Suki right beside him. I looked at their hair it was all messed up.

“You guys had some fun I see” I turned back to my tea. I stared into it. Tea it reminded me of Zuko and the tea shop.

“I saw Zuko working at a tea shop the other day”

“Zuko?” Sokka said.

“Yes”

“Here we go again” Katara said.

“Sorry for liking someone, at least I can get someone”

“WHAT?”

“You heard, go splash in some puddle somewhere”

“Aang make her stop”

“Don’t get me in this” he said as he backed away.

“Hey I heard that a tea shop near by was having a Karoke Night” Suki said.

“Really?” Katara said.

“Yeah, we should what do you say Aang?” Suki said.

“I say we go I guess.” I walked out the door and slamed it behind me.

“What’s wrong with her?” Sokka asked.

“Her boyfriend”

“I HEARD THAT WATER WOMAN!” I heard her talk about me, ‘damn bitch’ I thought. ‘Karoke night…And it has to be at his tea shop. I guess its time to face him. I love you Zuko, why did you break my heart’ I was wondering amsually…

~Flashback~

“Zuko…Your just going to leave?” I said, tears threatned to spill.

“Yes, I am”

“Why? Why would you leave you have no where to go?”

“I do…I am going to restore honor and become king…Mai is going to be my queen” that made the tears spill. He loved her…Not me.

“Zuko…How can you chose that path? I…I HATE YOU!” I run up to him and hugged him he was faced the other way. “I LOVE YOU, ZUKO. I ALWAYS HAVE…I have never seen anyone but you. I don’t care about you being rich or anything. I love you so much it hurts and I don’t want to let you go…Please stay?!”

“I am sorry, Cityana. I can not stay…” He pulled out of my grip. I heard it in his voice he really didn’t want to leave…I knew it… I just stood there and watched him leave. I cried so much. I never returned back to camp for days….

~End Of Flashback~

I was pulled from my thoughts when I ran into someone or something. I looked up. There he stood, she hair was short, he had earth kingdom clothes and he looked hot.

“Z…Zuko?”

“Cityana…” I got up and ran, ran away. I just didn’t want to be there. I arrived back at home, tear streeks down my face.

“Cityana…You okay?” Suki said, I looked down and hid my face. I glanced up and saw Katara, Aang, Suki, Sokka, Toph and The Duke and Jet?

“What is Jet doing here?” I said as I looked away.

“A hello is fine for your date.” I turned red. I hated Jet, he liked her.

“DATE!? HELL NO! YOU GO WITH JET KATARA…I WILL GO WITH AANG!”

“NO!”

“Yes”

“No”

“YES”

“No”

“Y-E-S, you like Jet anyway, Barbie bitch.” She said no more. “Where are we going for our date Aang?” I walked up and pushed Katara toward Jet.

“Karoke”

“SWEET” We arrived at karoke.

“Attetion everyone. EVERYONE SIGN-UP TO DO KAROKE. I will give you one hour to sign up….” The announcer stepped off the stage. I signed up. I was the only one. The others just wanted to dance. “First up, the tea shop owner/worker. Zuko.” My heart stopped, ‘no way?’ I thought. I looked up at the stage in ‘aw’ the music started and he sang;

“This is decitated to my old pal, Cityana” My heart took a leap when he said that.

‘I shouldn't love you but I want to
I just can't turn away
I shouldn't see you but I can't move
I can't look away

I shouldn't love you but I want to
I just can't turn away
I shouldn't see you but I can't move
I can't look away

And I don't know how to be fine when I'm not
'Cause I don't know how to make a feeling stop

Just so you know
This feeling's taking control of me
And I can't help it
I won't sit around, I can't let him win now
Thought you should know
I've tried my best to let go of you
But I don't want to
I just gotta say it all
Before I go
Just so you know

It's getting hard to be around you
There's so much I can't say
Do you want me to hide the feelings
And look the other way

And I don't know how to be fine when I'm not
'Cause I don't know how to make a feeling stop

Just so you know
This feeling's taking control of me
And I can't help it
I won't sit around, I can't let him win now
Thought you should know
I've tried my best to let go of you
But I don't want to
I just gotta say it all
Before I go
Just so you know

This emptiness is killing me
And I'm wondering why I've waited so long
Looking back I realize
It was always there just never spoken
I'm waiting here...been waiting here

Just so you know
This feeling's taking control of me
And I can't help it
I won't sit around, I can't let him win now
Thought you should know
I've tried my best to let go of you
But I don't want to
I just gotta say it all
Before I go
Just so you know’

The music came to a stop and I just watched him walk of the stage, he looked at me a tear slid down my face. I looked away. When I looked back up I saw the announcer pull a name out of the hat.

“Is there a Cityana here?”

“THAT’S YOU GURL GO!” Suki pushed me. I walked up on stage and the music began…I started to sing…

‘I always needed time on my own
I never thought I'd need you there when I cry
And the days feel like years when I'm alone
And the bed where you lie is made up on your side

When you walk away I count the steps that you take
Do you see how much I need you right now

When you're gone
The pieces of my heart are missing you
When you're gone
The face I came to know is missing too
When you're gone
The words I need to hear to always get me through the day and make it ok
I miss you

I've never felt this way before
Everything that I do reminds me of you
And the clothes you left, they lie on the floor
And they smell just like you, I love the things that you do

When you walk away I count the steps that you take
Do you see how much I need you right now

When you're gone
The pieces of my heart are missing you
When you're gone
The face I came to know is missing too
When you're gone
The words I need to hear to always get me through the day and make it ok
I miss you

We were made for each other
Out here forever
I know we were, yeah
All I ever wanted was for you to know
Everything I'd do, I'd give my heart and soul
I can hardly breathe I need to feel you here with me, yeah

When you're gone
The pieces of my heart are missing you
When you're gone
The face I came to know is missing too
When you're gone
The words I need to hear to always get me through the day and make it ok
I miss you’

The song was done and I had took a breath.

“That song was one that relates to me. It was all that I felt when my friend left me…”

“CITYANA” I heard some call me. I turned around saw Zuko run up toward me. I turned the other way. “Don’t ingore me” he gripped my shoulder. “I am sorry for leaving you”

“SORRY?! That doesn’t cut it Zuko. You left and-” I was inturputed by loud music, it was some song I didn’t know. I ran outside and Zuko followed. “You left and never said good-bye. I told you my feelings and never said a word.” I started to cry “and I was left heartbroken. I have only thought about you. No one else. I am madly in love with you…” He inturuped me with a kiss. I slowly kissed back. He broke the kiss.

“I never stopped thinking about you either. I just needed to find out if these feelings I felt were true. If not I didn’t want to hurt you.”

“Oh, Zuko” I cried.

“What are you-” I tugged on his arm.

“C’mon lets get out of here,” I looked in the window Katara was dancing with Aang and Jet was with some random chick.

“’K” He went along with it. I dragged him to our hotel room, well they gave me my own because I could be a bitch, but I was happy now. “You have your own room?”

“Yeah, when you left I became a bigger bitch than I was before.”

“Really?”

“Yeah, I was really up-set…” He pulled me into a hug.

“I am truly sorry, Cityana. If I had know what it would have turned you into….I would have never…” I put my had on his cheek.

“Its okay, Zuko. What’s done is done.”

“How can I make it up to you?”

“Ha…”

“What?” I leaned in a whispered something in his ear. He was shocked. “Really?” I nodded. He slowly wrapped his arms around my waist and he kissed me. Slowly he pulled my shirt and pants off. I did the same to him. He laied me down on the bed and straddled me.

“Is this really what you want?” I nodded, slowly he took my underwear off and my bra. I pulled off his boxers.

“Do it?” He jammed inside me. “Uhn” I said has me moved back and forth, slowly giving me time to adjust to his size. “ZUKO” I moaned.

“Cityana” he groaned. He moved in and out. I felt him grow harder and harder. I pushed him off, and out and then straddled him. I kissed him up and down the body. I got to his penis and I sucked on it. Licking the end where he had a little bit of cum build up. He moaned my name over and over. I loved it. He must have felt like he was being taken over. He put me on the ground a shoved his dick in my mouth and pumped in and out…

“Cityana…I love you…” He pulled it out.

“I love you too” I managed to mumble.

“Cityana…You in there?” *KNOCK, KNOCK*

“Yeah one second.” I got dressed in a hurry and so did Zuko. He walked to the door with me just before I opened it he put his hand on mine.

“Be mine and there is way more…”

“Yes…”

“Good” I opened the door there stood Suki, she knew every feeling I had for Zuko.

“WHAT THE HELL?” She punched him square in the face. “You break her heart and come back? Hell no!”

“Its okay Suki…He is now my boyfriend…”

“Okay but if you hurt Cityana, I swear to the Avatar, you will die!”

“Don’t worry I wont hurt her again…Never again…” Suki looks at me I just smile.

“Suki, can you give us a moment.” She nodded and left the door way. “Zuko, I am going to go and talk to Aang about you joining us.”

“Okay…” He grabbed me and brought me into a kiss. “Do your best”

“I will” I skipped down the hall and found Aang sitting in front of the fire place and Momo on his lap. “Uh- Aang?”

“Oh, Cityana. How are you? You left the karoke bar in a hurry.”

“I am fine. Did…Did you see Zuko’s performance?”

“I did, why?”

“Well-”

“It seemed like he applozied for hurting you” Katara said as she plopped herself down in her chair.

“It did” Aang said.

“He did. Do you think that he could travel with us? He can be you fire bending teacher!”

“I guess that would be okay…Katara?”

“Whatever, I am watching you too” I giggled.

“Thanks you guys” I skipped back down to my room and ran right up to Zuko jumped in his lap, he was sitting down, “you can stay! Who ever thought of a Star bender and Fire bender dating….”

“I don’t know…I love you, Cityana. I will never let you go, just so you know” he whispered in my ear. I giggled and then he kissed me.

2 comments:

  1. Why didn't you just put a reader insert? And the story was poorly written.

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